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...CLooouuuuDY.... by erhansasmaz ...CLooouuuuDY.... :iconerhansasmaz:erhansasmaz 901 121 S U N D A Y . S M I L E by k-tones S U N D A Y . S M I L E :iconk-tones:k-tones 800 145 Cabaret by Lingrimm Cabaret :iconlingrimm:Lingrimm 690 75 Octo-EyeScream by tdol3 Octo-EyeScream :icontdol3:tdol3 772 126 Leaving Burmecia by CarolinReich Leaving Burmecia :iconcarolinreich:CarolinReich 1,281 137 Bed time tale by 3-Keiko-chan-3 Bed time tale :icon3-keiko-chan-3:3-Keiko-chan-3 3,506 328 Lady Of The Castle II by Eirian-stock Lady Of The Castle II :iconeirian-stock:Eirian-stock 620 32 LoX: Princess by SquChan LoX: Princess :iconsquchan:SquChan 3,213 203 Assembled Necklace: Erosion by copperrein Assembled Necklace: Erosion :iconcopperrein:copperrein 492 87 Forbidden by timothyjahn Forbidden :icontimothyjahn:timothyjahn 1,133 107 99EYES 003 by SADON999 99EYES 003 :iconsadon999:SADON999 1,978 114 spurplunking on sunday by Ace60 spurplunking on sunday :iconace60:Ace60 472 85 it wasn't me by TrixyPixie it wasn't me :icontrixypixie:TrixyPixie 8,210 624 Inception by Sidiuss Inception :iconsidiuss:Sidiuss 2,015 254 UF-TIA-Spiral 2 by Lupsiberg UF-TIA-Spiral 2 :iconlupsiberg:Lupsiberg 469 170 Chinese Doll Orianna Lunar Revel by CLK-Design Chinese Doll Orianna Lunar Revel :iconclk-design:CLK-Design 2,382 118


The train lurches forward and my time is running out,
The seats are numbing, under the lows ceilings I have to crouch.
As the country speeds by in a grey and green blur,
wether i'll ever make it i'm not sure.
We are nearing our destination, I see the nearing sign that says;
"Sulton Square, KS" as we pass, the gathering winds make it sway.
We grind to a jerking stop, and the passengers immediatly pour out.
Among the bustling crowd I hear a raspy shout.
It's my brother, waiting nervously with a throat full of hate,
He sounded almost sure, as he rung out "you are going to be late!"
We reached the spot and bolted, through masses more than we can count,
From the look on the secretary's face I was done for without a doubt.
But my co-workers were welcoming, although their greetings roughly fast-paced,
But this next event is really what determined my fate.
At my desk there sat a  rather haggard-looking man,
His face wrinkled in cruel accusation, a paper slip in his hand.
And now as I walk sullenly home,
I have the comfort, that in this situation i'm not alone.
There are many who have experienced being late for their very last time,
And i'm sure to each of their poems, they have this similar rhyme.
And with eachother, after a few sips of scotch,
we discuss how we once had lived out lives in a pocket-watch.



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Lupsiberg Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for the :+fav: :bow: :)
Ace60 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012
hello, i appreciate you adding my work to your gallery :)
kilsya1 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem!
killermuffin1997 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks for adding my drawing to your faves! :heart: and look at the emoticon in the top right hand corner. Look familiar?
kilsya1 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lawl! I sees.
Yagamiseven Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
welcome to DA and thank for the watch
kilsya1 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No Prob ^(-_-)^
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